tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3050804482303474411.post7768979492892713016..comments2022-12-04T12:45:14.085-08:00Comments on Twisted Dandelion Productions: FFP #1 - Know ThyselfTwisted Lihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492517953605791230noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3050804482303474411.post-17747693490165276252013-02-14T15:39:27.315-08:002013-02-14T15:39:27.315-08:00This one has me knitting through a succession of q...This one has me knitting through a succession of questions. This piece has a poetic integrity. But I was confused by the changes in tense and between the uses of singular vs plural. If this Self is an infection whose purpose is revenge, could it not still be contained given that it is transmitted by blood, not air? but what kind of invader would an air-borne invader be? probably not self-aware in the least. But I've never thought about it.<br><br> And in the fourth paragraph I was not sure about who the Self was staggering against. If it is just one of the many inhabited, what made that one different? The fact that he happened to come at the point when the invader was reaching exhaustion? That's probably it. I've always had to have complex plots explained to me, and beyond that, I'm probably over thinking a vignette. Who was able to recognize, finally, that this Being was even going around infecting us? What was the fatal mistake that blew its cover? <br> <br>Thanks for listening. I only had three hours' sleep last night!Parabolic Musehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08293896881451344660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3050804482303474411.post-23305244287321443282013-01-16T08:24:27.635-08:002013-01-16T08:24:27.635-08:00Excellent as ever!AKExcellent as ever!<br>AKAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com